Broadjam Artist: Tommy Stewart
Song: Animal
Reviewer: Lars Michnevich, a.k.a. Chief Inspector of “Bunko Squad”
Positive Comments: As I have a long attention span I enjoyed the intro buildup. Your recording was really pretty good and the mix was also. Your lyrics are appropriate for the style of this tune and your singing was, too. Keep on truckin’!
Constructive Comments: Though your mix was pretty good I wonder if your vocal could be a tad, and I mean just a little bit, louder in the chorus. The drums are crisp and clear but I might lower them just a bit during the verse. Now for my main complaint: I know that current song writing practices have a tendency to be overly repetitive so that I often get “bored” hearing the same chords, (harmonic structure), over and over. This is not a criticism of your song as much as an observation of contemporary practices. Which brings me to my suggestion of putting in a bridge with some different chords to mix it up a bit. If a provider wants just a few chords in a song you can always edit out a bridge, etc. Keep writing!