Broadjam Artist: lost on foot
Song: until the day i die
Reviewer: Missing Link Us
Positive Comments: The harmonies are a really good part of this song. Somehow your lead vocal sounds more spoken than sung though, and this interferes with it being a really great song and keeps it being more of a below average or pretty good tune here. Very nineteen fifties. A song of requited love. Boy meets girl, boy keeps girl. Great. For art, give me a little more magic maybe though about all these decades of successful married life. I either need to dance or to be awed, with any song. You know it’s a good song, but needs another lead vocalist to make it be what it really can be. You have to watch if you’re talking to someone or entertaining the public? “If you’ve got a message to send, use Western Union.” – Arthur Miller. So we know you’re happy and in love, but how may, an audience, respond to that?
Constructive Comments: The harmonies are a really good part of this song. Somehow your lead vocal sounds more spoken than sung though, and this interferes with it being a really great song and keeps it being more of a below average or pretty good tune here. Very nineteen fifties. A song of requited love. Boy meets girl, boy keeps girl. Great. For art, give me a little more magic maybe though about all these decades of successful married life. I either need to dance or to be awed, with any song. You know it’s a good song, but needs another lead vocalist to make it be what it really can be. You have to watch if you’re talking to someone or entertaining the public? “If you’ve got a message to send, use Western Union.” – Arthur Miller. So we know you’re happy and in love, but how may, an audience, respond to that?