Broadjam Artist: David James
Song: Long Lost Dreams(ft. CoriAnder & Amy Reader)
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Love the mood in the intro–silky key sounds. Nice voice and good lyrics and a very strong hook. The tune and vocal are much like a Rikki Lee Jones song, and that’s cool! Very nice work!!
Constructive Comments: You double the vocal too strongly and it clutters the execution –the phrasing is off in places and with an equal 2nd vocal track it makes it rough (I have done this so many times). I’d back off the double track so it’s supporting but not competing in the verses and then use it full on during the chorus. I think you need a drum track and a more active bass. This has a really good core but I think you need to put more energy and pulse into the instrumental tracks.