Broadjam Artist: Eric Lives Here
Song: Night is Young (White Raven Remix)
Reviewer: Paul Krans
Positive Comments: Very upbeat and possibly happy. The lyrics stay within the subject and keep telling the story. The vocals als well sung and the instrumental parts are well crafted to support the vocal melody lines of the lyrics. I like how the song starts in that upbeat feel and even though giving away the most important part of the chorus in the first lines of the song, it could well work here! Good job!
Constructive Comments: The bridge is surprising and feels well complementing the song, but could be shorter to keep the focus on the song. Though well sun, personally, I think the lines ending in a lower note than the rest of each line, makes the song feel less upbeat than it could be. In general, “happy” does not end on a lower key. Maybe see if with a little more up keys at the end of some (not all) lines, the son would give it that top upbeat feel it can have! Overall: good job!