Broadjam Artist: Jeff Maguire
Song: Elvis On A Telephone Pole
Reviewer: The Woodmen
Positive Comments: Enjoyed the lyrics and their imagery – great work on those. I hear ELO elements, even Dire Straits influences in the song. Like the spoken stuff at the end too. Lots of good ideas here.
Constructive Comments: I think you can develop the song more – get some variations in the drum patterns and in the style of guitar parts beyond just chords. The lead was buried in the mix – I’d bring it up unless you did that on purpose.