Broadjam Artist: Douglas Branson aka dB+1
Song: I’m Not Laughing About It (LIVE)
Reviewer: Fire in the Sky
Positive Comments: The tightness of the musicians is excellent. I mean super tight. This track got got better about the 2 minute mark. The guitar solo is good. I like the tone of the guitar. The melody is good as well. I actually like the tempo change at the end. That was a good redeeming quality. Keep it up guys!
Constructive Comments: Now for the constructive criticism…the production lacks a lot to be desired. Pretty sure you guys know that. I can get over that. The vocals and the lyrics need some work. The vocals at the beginning of the track are quirky, but not in the best way. They get better toward the end of the track. The lyrics are a bit elementary in composition and delivery. All of that can be fixed. I think this group has a lot of potential, but some work needs to be done. The musicianship is spot on. Please take my criticism as constructive, and in no way personal. Keep up the good work and I look forward to listening to more.