Month: February 2018

Broadjam Artist: lost on foot
Song: live to love another day

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Love is a battlefield to walk away from is the theme of this unique love song. The vocalist presents a nice, clear delivery with a tinge of tasty British accent, sounding very good. The lyrics follow the battlefield theme throughout…good job. Favorite rhyme: used to be/easily. Full band instrumentation sounds especially good and really shines on the instrumental section, with a carefully thought outro finishing it off.

Constructive Comments: Sometimes “ain’t” works, but more in country genre. “Isn’t” might work just as well in verse 1. Okay, I’m picking and I apologize. Walk away/live to love another day is nice but not what I would call unique and original. It works, though. Nice song and I wish you the best! Mrs. Kate

Broadjam Artist: Chet Nichols
Song: Two Hearts Of Gold (from “Cross Country”)

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: Like the singing style here! Nice theme!

Constructive Comments: Wouldnt change much on this song. Still. a lead of some kind would fit. Or, a key change, emodulation—some kind of “trick”. A Bass guitar might as well!Keep On Truckin!=============catnip===============

Broadjam Artist: Delta Burnett Reed
Song: Ba Loo Loo, My Lammie

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: Fresh start for this number! Beautiful voice and recorded correctly!

Constructive Comments: I would like to hear a little percussion of some kind if you could try it! Very interesting song!All The Musical Best! ==============catnip===============

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Blind Stitch In My Heart / The Blues

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: Interesting fresh vibe here!

Constructive Comments: I kept waiting for the drums to drop in on this tune! Like the melody on too! Also picture a woman singing with a little “scat” thrown in!All The Best!=======Catnip=============

Broadjam Artist: Bart
Song: Loyalty

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: Sounds like a song from the 70’s when a lot of songs had organs in them.

Constructive Comments: The lead vocal is red lining through most of the song. This doesn’t leave much “Headroom” for the other instruments to come through. I would suggest backing off a little on the lead vocal. A little compression on the Master volume would make the overall song more cohesive!All My Musical Best! ===============catnip===============

Broadjam Artist: Robert Donovan
Song: Don’t Miss Me Baby

Reviewer: Bart

Positive Comments: Interesting solo.Love the drums.

Constructive Comments: You may want to increase the tempo.Try to get some more interesting words.

Broadjam Artist: Chet Nichols
Song: I Hurt Too Much To Squeeze (#1 Blues-Rock)

Reviewer: Bart

Positive Comments: Lead knows how to work that penatonic scale. Well done.well mixed.

Constructive Comments: Low end vocal needs to go up in octave.Add some blues notes.

Broadjam Artist: Spider kiting
Song: Who stole the sun

Reviewer: Bart

Positive Comments: Killer lead guitar player. Wish I was that fast and accurate. Song well mixed.

Constructive Comments: To much of who stole the sun. OVER DONE!Get better words.

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: If Momma Ain’t Say So / Blues Rock

Reviewer: Bart

Positive Comments: Great rhythm. Like the palm muting.

Constructive Comments: a little to repetitive.

Broadjam Artist: David J. Hentosh
Song: Stay Away From the River

Reviewer: Bart

Positive Comments: Nice use of double stops. Good lead guitar.

Constructive Comments: I would put some words to the bride just before the solo around the 2:19 min mark.This some ROCKS!This could be a great tune!