Broadjam Artist: Bart
Song: Nothing
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: This song has an interesting metaphor – that history repeats itself, stated in the first verse. It’s a stream of consciousness song with random thoughts about life and love that center around…Nothing. Easy going guitar accompaniment. Interesting thought that the price of love is high but costs nothing…a real paradox. Best lyric: Tickle history’s chimes.
Constructive Comments: I think you would benefit from working with a vocal coach – with a goal to singing with more clarity. There’s a bit of a nasal quality that takes away from the performance. Song doesn’t seem to have a real chorus, unless it’s the twice-repeated “Our eyes met..” Work on originality in lyric writing and choice of rhymes.