Broadjam Artist: Ben Green
Song: On My Mind
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: Even though I’m not a big fan of rap, I liked this song. The lyrics are fresh, crisp & original (tingles down my vertebrae – loved it). The beat is fantastic and the harmonies really work. I like the fact that this strays from the “cheap love/one night stands” and speaks of marriage, wife, etc. We need more of that in rap music. Nice job!
Constructive Comments: Some of the vocals were a little muddy. I understood you better as the song progressed. Ending needs work…it’s so anti-climactic.