Broadjam Artist: Nigel Barrett
Song: Kiss Me (can I get to call you honey)
Reviewer: Simon Finn
Positive Comments: Well this is certainly like nothing I’ve ever heard before. I liked the verse and the chorus, but I think the song could have survived without the bridge, using it instead as a middle 8 in the final quarter of the song. You have some strange lyric choices, such as the references to kebabs and “kiss me down the stairs”…if these are intentional, then I think the quirkyness wins and it works
Constructive Comments: Depends on your intention i guess but technically speaking “Kiss me down the stairs” doesn’t really make sense and I couldn’t work out what you might be meaning if you were writing figuratively.