Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Breathless / Dance Club Mix
Reviewer: Simon Finn
Positive Comments: “You’ve lit a fever, in this unbeliever” – what a great lyric! I loved the melody and the harmony of this song – it has an unusual structure, really making you wait for the hook / payoff but it kind of works.
Constructive Comments: So – the lyrics above are good, but some of the others were trying just TOO hard to rhyme exactly and left me wondering what you were trying to say. Also – the bass riff that you start with become annoying. You have a good harmonic structure, get your bass to follow and play along with that a little. Good work, good luck with this!