Month: January 2018

Broadjam Artist: Memorybank
Song: Orange Slice

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very energy-laden song. Grabs you right at the intro. Fantastic riff here. Instrumentation and arrangement are really impressive. Good, energetic song!

Constructive Comments: Not sure what the theme is here. I feel like something is over my head, but not knowing the general theme of this keeps me from liking it even more.

Broadjam Artist: Randy Steward
Song: Sailin’ Man

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very nice, smooth flowing song. After the into, you expect to hear Jimmy Buffet. Clever lyrics, and I love the way the song holds together so well. Also love the sound effects. This song succeeds greatly at putting you in the mood. You feel like you’re actually on a ship and can feel the waves. Good job.

Constructive Comments: Very easy song to listen to. Good work!

Broadjam Artist: Randy Steward
Song: Sailin’ Man

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very nice, smooth flowing song. After the into, you expect to hear Jimmy Buffet. Clever lyrics, and I love the way the song holds together so well. Also love the sound effects. This song succeeds greatly at putting you in the mood. You feel like you’re actually on a ship and can feel the waves. Good job.

Constructive Comments: Very easy song to listen to. Good work!

Broadjam Artist: Brenda Craven
Song: Sunrays

Reviewer: RICARDO ALONSO

Positive Comments: Like the idea, melody is good. Kind of bedtime song.

Constructive Comments: Too repetitive, although there are some changes in melody.

Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: Carillon Romance Concerto #5

Reviewer: RICARDO ALONSO

Positive Comments: the idea is good. song is kind of mystical, medieval,and religious for some kind of ritual.

Constructive Comments: mix is too compressed, the “church Bell” is too loud and disonant.

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Once Upon A Time x

Reviewer: RICARDO ALONSO

Positive Comments: Like this song, piano and strings have their own melody and fit both well enough. Never decays the song. good work.

Constructive Comments: my only con is the sound of instruments, lioke extracted from a cheap instrument.

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Once Upon A Time x

Reviewer: RICARDO ALONSO

Positive Comments: Like this song, piano and strings have their own melody and fit both well enough. Never decays the song. good work.

Constructive Comments: my only con is the sound of instruments, lioke extracted from a cheap instrument.

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: That Was Then and This is Now

Reviewer: Randy Steward

Positive Comments: Nice intro musically. The beat and the flow are very dance-able, leaning towards a country feel. There is some nice phrasing in the lyrics and the bridge had a nice feel.

Constructive Comments: Honestly I was hoping for a little more variation overall. I was a little confused with the lyrics with regards to what you were trying to say over all. Overall I enjoyed your song and look forward to more.

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: That Was Then and This is Now

Reviewer: Randy Steward

Positive Comments: Nice intro musically. The beat and the flow are very dance-able, leaning towards a country feel. There is some nice phrasing in the lyrics and the bridge had a nice feel.

Constructive Comments: Honestly I was hoping for a little more variation overall. I was a little confused with the lyrics with regards to what you were trying to say over all. Overall I enjoyed your song and look forward to more.

Broadjam Artist: lost on foot
Song: be my valentine

Reviewer: David James

Positive Comments: Great organic feel to the song. I really like the instrumental arrangement. Great drums bass and staccato guitar chords. Excellent use of the subtle keyboard. Excellent vocal delivery. Great drive to the song and it’s very catchy.

Constructive Comments: I’ve knocked down the quality of the recording by a notch because I think the vocal is too low in the mix at some points. Otherwise it’s very strong.