be my valentine by lost on foot

lost on foot

Broadjam Artist: lost on foot
Song: be my valentine

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: Wow the engineering on the drums and guitar is fantastic. That’s a killer guitar tone and guitar part on the rhythm guitar and the same for the lead. Nice driving, warm & gritty bass tone that works with the drums, especially when they roll into the tom pattern and the bass drives hard 8ths. Nice organ & leslie too. This is one damn good sound and arrangement–it’s so clean but driving and tasty with lots of space & clarity but grit too. This could be a Tom Petty tune. I’m really glad I got to hear this. Excellent work!!

Constructive Comments: Your vocal performance isn’t quite up to the level of the rest–you’re coasting here. It needs more vocal gravel, distortion, low fi, and gotta bone to pick intensity or any combination. I’m not sure the lyrics fit the song that well.

lost on foot

Broadjam Artist: lost on foot
Song: be my valentine

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: Wow the engineering on the drums and guitar is fantastic. That’s a killer guitar tone and guitar part on the rhythm guitar and the same for the lead. Nice driving, warm & gritty bass tone that works with the drums, especially when they roll into the tom pattern and the bass drives hard 8ths. Nice organ & leslie too. This is one damn good sound and arrangement–it’s so clean but driving and tasty with lots of space & clarity but grit too. This could be a Tom Petty tune. I’m really glad I got to hear this. Excellent work!!

Constructive Comments: Your vocal performance isn’t quite up to the level of the rest–you’re coasting here. It needs more vocal gravel, distortion, low fi, and gotta bone to pick intensity or any combination. I’m not sure the lyrics fit the song that well.