
Broadjam Artist: lost on foot
Song: i cried a river
Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat
Positive Comments: Reminds me of the Kinks at the first part! Nice vocals!
Constructive Comments: I like this song overall but I felt the melody got a little overworked. I would like to see you write a break for this song that would take it to a new plateau and then bring it back to the main melody. a key change could be used as well!========Keep On Truckin!==========catnip pat=================