Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: WOULDN’T LIFE BE EASY?
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: This is a song of many questions, and they are good questions about life, war, injustice. There’s a lot of aged wisdom here that still remembers how young people think. This is a deep song. Perhaps it started out as a poem and someone made it into a song. Great lyric: The science of the pain. Great rhymes: stride/pride, hard/cards. I found myself trying to second-guess what the expected word would be at the end of phrases and found the artist picking another word than I thought of. Points for originality!
Constructive Comments: There is no musical introduction to this song the artist just dives right in. Come up with an intro that sets the song up nicely. Fix the outro it’s too abrupt. This is a song without a chorus. Could you try writing one for it?