Broadjam Artist: Jon Lyons, Song Writer and Performer
Song: Do you right
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: Plaintive, haunting, lonely, sad. These words describe this melancholy post-love song. The guitar playing suits the mood and vocals well. “I’m a river let me flow” is a great lyric. There is some effective internal rhyming here (shades/crave). This song asks a lot of questions, and the answers are left to the imagination. Nice job on the vocals!
Constructive Comments: The chord timing seems to be off at 1:28. Is the catch in your voice (like 1:06) natural for your style of singing, or are you trying to imitate another artist? Hope to hear more of your work!