If Your Heart Should Get Lonely For Me by Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: If Your Heart Should Get Lonely For Me

Reviewer: John Masarone

Positive Comments: You have what I believe to be the beginnings of a good song. You have to start somewhere. It is stripped down but some of the progressions have potential.

Constructive Comments: The overall mix is not very good for what would be considered as, “broadcast ready.” However, it is good enough to work from. I’m thinking that the melody line needs a little more flow. Sounds a little too staccato. It is fine for showing a vocalist what to sing. I would use a sound that has more sustain/decay. Like a string instrument. This is all my opinion. These are things that come to mind after listening two times.

Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: If Your Heart Should Get Lonely For Me

Reviewer: John Masarone

Positive Comments: You have what I believe to be the beginnings of a good song. You have to start somewhere. It is stripped down but some of the progressions have potential.

Constructive Comments: The overall mix is not very good for what would be considered as, “broadcast ready.” However, it is good enough to work from. I’m thinking that the melody line needs a little more flow. Sounds a little too staccato. It is fine for showing a vocalist what to sing. I would use a sound that has more sustain/decay. Like a string instrument. This is all my opinion. These are things that come to mind after listening two times.