Broadjam Artist: Jon Lyons, Song Writer and Performer
Song: Do you right
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Really nice vocal quality here. Pitch perfect and a really sweet timbre. Lots of potential with this singer and the bones of the tune.
Constructive Comments: The acoustic guitar sound is not very good here–it’s got chorus? on it that doesn’t help, and it’s overall very murky. Getting an acoustic to sound good is hard but try to get it clean and bright. There’s too much repetition of “if I can do you right” –it’s not that strong a hook and would be too much with almost any hook.