Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: Lounge Act
Reviewer: Jon Lyons, Song Writer and Performer
Positive Comments: I can say for sure that you had an Idea of where you wanted the song to go and a ideal of the feel you wanted your song to carry. Through some of your transitions I could sense what you were attempting to portray here.
Constructive Comments: I believe that you certainly have to focus on the dynamics of your music, the saying “less is more” is something you should really practice here. If you are wanting this song to really have energy, then it has to have a place to go, it has to have room to build, but you are hitting ip to the top from the get go, and it just has no room to build up. The splash cymbal seems way to much and is very distracting to what your trying to reveal here, just removing that would help greatly. The bass is to much out front and should be set back a little more. I would really like to here this song again when you have a little more patience with it, and let it build up with some dynamics.