
Broadjam Artist: Jeff Maguire
Song: Light Shine
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Great groove and the opening melody sounds like a George Harrison tune. Nice easy guitar soloing and a convincing vocal performance. It kinda straddles Country and Roots Rock with an almost Everly Brothers result.
Constructive Comments: You start with a chorus and kinda never stop. I think you need to have more contrast between high energy/tension in a chorus and then backing off a bit to tell the message in the verses. You’re making pitch for the most part but you’re at an uncomfortable extreme of your vocal range. What about putting it in key where you can sing *easy* ? Adding a 2nd harmony vocal on the chorus would be goo.