Broadjam Artist: Yung Proof
Song: Because I’m Brown
Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat
Positive Comments: Don’t Approve your angle You can make the same point much stronger using a different approachMy mother said “You catch more flies with honey than you do with vinegar!”
Constructive Comments: As above sit down and try to say the same thing like Ghandi, or Martin Luther King would! Don’t ever be afraid to do a rewrite because you find that you can usually do it better if you will just try! You don’t want to focus on violence when you can move more people with love and compassion!Look for the Dove–Music is Love! Catnip =+=