Broadjam Artist: Yung Proof
Song: Because I’m Brown
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Cool intro. The rap has a lot of strength in the rhymes, flow and the message. I like “that ain’t right” coming in. There’s real passion here, and it’s an important topic.
Constructive Comments: NWA did this hook. I’m not sure it works–it will turn a lot of people away, and I think the message could be more powerful if you were more subtle–you’ve already got real strength and hook in the lyrics. Gotta be the same person I reviewed last night. Again I think the vocals are too up front and should be doubled to make it less dry and “single voice”. I like the “Snoop” voice that comes in but it’s late in the tune to do that–I’d start incorporating that sooner. The musical bed underneath could be more interesting and have more groove to drive this.