Broadjam Artist: Yung Proof
Song: Southern California
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: That intro is sweet and elegant. Lots of attitude and boast, you know like a rap song? Daisy Dukes and stray curlies, indeed what more do you need???
Constructive Comments: I think the vocal is too far up in the mix. Instead should be lower but more doubling so it has a more powerful, larger than life impression. Not sure the “where I want to be Yeeeeaaaaaa” is working well. And I think you’ve exceed the “nigga” frequency allowed per verse. Seriously it’s too much here IMO. I’d argue for more backing vocals / answer raps / 2nd rapper coming in to pick up the theme and take it somewhere different.