Broadjam Artist: Felice Kaye-Cooper / Songwriter
Song: Can’t You See/Featuring Phoebe Blume
Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat
Positive Comments: ok this is different like the tone of that keyboard wondering if the harp is done from the keyboard, you ve got the right idea.
Constructive Comments: you’ve got the voice and that’s a huge part of the equationyour song is ok but could be made better by: Get Masterwriter, and say the same things you are saying but using new phrases–it’s full of ideas,2. go to Taxi’s annual convention in LA. By going only once it will change the songwriter in you—I know it did me,3. don’t be satisfied with your first version of your song. look at it, change some things around, make it stronger, revise and read again,improving all the time,,when you think you’ve really nailed it—-then record it! ==========Catnip===========