Broadjam Artist: Joseph Miller
Song: Didn’t We Almost Make It a
Reviewer: Lauren McNally
Positive Comments: I really loved the lyrics, they were emotional and emotion was really conveyed through the lyrics. I thought the simplicity of the single vocal melodyline was extremely effective in making the listener feel almost in touch with the song as if we were the one who almost ‘made it’ with someone. Although further instrumentation would add to the song, I personally feel that too many instruments would take away from the delicacy of this song.Your song is fabulous!I hope this helps 🙂
Constructive Comments: To improve, try adding a simple piano counter melody and chords (this shouldn’t be ‘in the listeners face’ or overpowering). The lyrics, as mentioned before, I absolutely adore. I feel they are very personal but also catchy with a great hook to lure the listener in. However, I think the different sections of the song could be more distinctive, just to add variation to the piece.But overall, I love it!