Month: October 2017

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Who Put a Toothpick in my Waterbed?

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: Very funny song – great vocals as well. The guitar sounds great and has a wonderful rhythm – the children’s voices is a very good idea and sounds great.

Constructive Comments: Wonderful song – I wish I had some constructive comments, but I wouldn’t change a thing. Best wishes!

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Who Put a Toothpick in my Waterbed?

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: Very funny song – great vocals as well. The guitar sounds great and has a wonderful rhythm – the children’s voices is a very good idea and sounds great.

Constructive Comments: Wonderful song – I wish I had some constructive comments, but I wouldn’t change a thing. Best wishes!

Broadjam Artist: RICARDO ALONSO
Song: Yakatajazz

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: Impeccable timing, really cool drums and keyboard – very precise and clean. Love the bass guitar as well. I love where the keyboards are placed and I also love the staccato feel!

Constructive Comments: I love this song, I think it is just so cool and original – very professional sounding and I wouldn’t change a thing – best wishes!

Broadjam Artist: RICARDO ALONSO
Song: Yakatajazz

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: Impeccable timing, really cool drums and keyboard – very precise and clean. Love the bass guitar as well. I love where the keyboards are placed and I also love the staccato feel!

Constructive Comments: I love this song, I think it is just so cool and original – very professional sounding and I wouldn’t change a thing – best wishes!

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: It Could A Been A Bad Move

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I like the lead vocals and the rhythm guitar and bass guitar. Very cool lyrics as well.

Constructive Comments: I recording is really rough and I think if it were better, this song would really stand out. You really have to redo this recording – best wishes!

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: It Could A Been A Bad Move

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I like the lead vocals and the rhythm guitar and bass guitar. Very cool lyrics as well.

Constructive Comments: I recording is really rough and I think if it were better, this song would really stand out. You really have to redo this recording – best wishes!

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: Even Now (Jimmy Michaels Night Mix)

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: Man – that is a very cool intro with the drums, the keyboards are great and so is the cool guitar lead.Great vocals and backing vocals – sounds a little like KC and the Sunshine Band.

Constructive Comments: I think the song would be much better if the vocals started within the first 25 seconds of the song, and that is still possible with shouts placed in the correct places. I would leave the words out of the bridge and go with a lead guitar or saxophone.

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: Even Now (Jimmy Michaels Night Mix)

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: Man – that is a very cool intro with the drums, the keyboards are great and so is the cool guitar lead.Great vocals and backing vocals – sounds a little like KC and the Sunshine Band.

Constructive Comments: I think the song would be much better if the vocals started within the first 25 seconds of the song, and that is still possible with shouts placed in the correct places. I would leave the words out of the bridge and go with a lead guitar or saxophone.

Broadjam Artist: Keith Taylor
Song: Crank It Up

Reviewer: Charlie Shock

Positive Comments: Good work on a straight ahead 12 bar country/blues classic type of song! The musicianship and vocals are all complimentary to the track and the production & recording are well done.

Constructive Comments: My only constructive criticism might be that this song may not be the most “unique” that I’ve ever heard, HOWEVER it is still a solid song that would be well received in any pub across the country!!!

Broadjam Artist: Keith Taylor
Song: Crank It Up

Reviewer: Charlie Shock

Positive Comments: Good work on a straight ahead 12 bar country/blues classic type of song! The musicianship and vocals are all complimentary to the track and the production & recording are well done.

Constructive Comments: My only constructive criticism might be that this song may not be the most “unique” that I’ve ever heard, HOWEVER it is still a solid song that would be well received in any pub across the country!!!