Month: October 2017

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Thank A Vet

Reviewer: Rocky Larson

Positive Comments: Good vocals interesting effect.

Constructive Comments: Needs a better hook, seems to be staying the same through the song.

Broadjam Artist: Laura Adamowsky
Song: I’ll Be There

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Beautiful song of love! Synth intro sets a happy mood for this love song. Lots of eventide imagery (moonlight, stars) which augment the magical ambiance this song portrays. Lovely female vocal, crystal-clear communicates the love message so well. This is a nicely-crafted, impeccably performed song. Bravo!

Constructive Comments: If this is just a demo, it’s a great start. If you take it to the next level, I’d try to improve on the synth-sounding arrangement, possibly make it a little more richer and “real-sounding”. Nothing wrong with it really. It seems like I have heard this song before….

Broadjam Artist: Laura Adamowsky
Song: I’ll Be There

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Beautiful song of love! Synth intro sets a happy mood for this love song. Lots of eventide imagery (moonlight, stars) which augment the magical ambiance this song portrays. Lovely female vocal, crystal-clear communicates the love message so well. This is a nicely-crafted, impeccably performed song. Bravo!

Constructive Comments: If this is just a demo, it’s a great start. If you take it to the next level, I’d try to improve on the synth-sounding arrangement, possibly make it a little more richer and “real-sounding”. Nothing wrong with it really. It seems like I have heard this song before….

Broadjam Artist: FRED GROSS
Song: The Chill Grill

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Nice instrumental song with some great blues players involved here. My favorite instrument was the wailing sax. Guitar sounds fantastic, too. Rhythm is tight. Bass player doing an awesome job. Keep up the good work.

Constructive Comments: God bless you! Keep making great music! Mrs. Kate

Broadjam Artist: FRED GROSS
Song: The Chill Grill

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Nice instrumental song with some great blues players involved here. My favorite instrument was the wailing sax. Guitar sounds fantastic, too. Rhythm is tight. Bass player doing an awesome job. Keep up the good work.

Constructive Comments: God bless you! Keep making great music! Mrs. Kate

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: Even Now (Jimmy Michaels Night Mix)

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Very creative piece! Although I am not familiar with this genre, I was impressed by the originality of this song. I liked the way rap is interspersed with singing, instrumental sections. “Every soul needs time.” Some good wisdom in there. Chorus is catchy and clever. The “radio voice” is very cool, good diction there.

Constructive Comments: I wasn’t fond of the “extra voices” in the mix. To me, that was confusing. Over 7 minutes long! Surely this could be shortened up. There was a lot of time “waiting for the next thing to happen.” You probably had a good reason for it, though.

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: Even Now (Jimmy Michaels Night Mix)

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Very creative piece! Although I am not familiar with this genre, I was impressed by the originality of this song. I liked the way rap is interspersed with singing, instrumental sections. “Every soul needs time.” Some good wisdom in there. Chorus is catchy and clever. The “radio voice” is very cool, good diction there.

Constructive Comments: I wasn’t fond of the “extra voices” in the mix. To me, that was confusing. Over 7 minutes long! Surely this could be shortened up. There was a lot of time “waiting for the next thing to happen.” You probably had a good reason for it, though.