Jeanie by Randal Dunkle

Broadjam Artist: Randal DunkleSong: JeanieReviewer: TrinityPositive Comments: This is a nice lament style of song with a distinctive husky vocal and clear lyrics, plus a strong piano accompaniment, giving it a kind of Billy Joel feel to it. The song i…

Randal Dunkle

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Jeanie

Reviewer: Trinity

Positive Comments: This is a nice lament style of song with a distinctive husky vocal and clear lyrics, plus a strong piano accompaniment, giving it a kind of Billy Joel feel to it. The song is such, that it could be played with a guitar, or as heard, a piano, it doesn’t depend on mass production to make it work. This artist obviously knew Jeannie (however it was spelt) it was heartfelt and genuine.

Constructive Comments: A song with a strong emphasis on a particular subject or person, has the effect of marginalizing itself, as it would only work in a very specific situation. There of course is nothing wrong with a heartfelt song about someone you care about, but you have to accept the fact, it may not work in many Broadjam markets. I feel the mix was a little abrasive and needed to be softened somewhat, the vocals may be a little high in the mix and needed a touch of (or more) reverb, to sweeten them a little.