Broadjam Artist: Laura Adamowsky
Song: No Need To Ask
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Super nice mood kicks right in with that dark piano and slow groove. Very clear and lovely vocals. I really like the male 2nd vocal coming behind like a Luther Vandross part. Nice bridge with a chromatic bassline descending under the chords. The keyboard work here is class. I really like the way lyrics/melody and voice come together on “no need to ask me when the years begin to fade” that is a great moment. There is a lot of talent and passion here!!
Constructive Comments: I think you need a drum pickup on the intro to orient the listener to the start of the song. Your first verse is almost more like a chorus. I don’t feel like the story is established enough, ie what is the song about? Good love / bad love etc.No need to *ask* you’re flat on ‘ask’There’s tons of talent here. I don’t feel like the song lyrics and structure are where you need them to be yet. Who would you point to as a model for an artist or song?