Broadjam Artist: Mikee Lee
Song: Tryst
Reviewer: Mike Cantwell – TalentEast Productions
Positive Comments: OK. May have a home in a TV or film scene.
Constructive Comments: Too shallow of instruments. The lower register is not portrayed at all. You really need lower sounds added. Possibly, you could do some of the instruments copied and drop an octave lower into the lower register. Add it to the existing music. If that is not enough, play/add in a synth bass line. You’ve got a great start, but it’s too thin, too shallow sounding. Occasionally do a walking synth bass for energy. And cut the damn Star Wars ending off. Hokey sounding. So, you’ve got a solid 2/3 of a full song in sound width. it needs some low sounds compared to others on Broadjam.