Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: Wonderfully Moody
Reviewer: Chet Nichols
Positive Comments: Fun song. Great all around. The instrumentation is very good. Nice mix. Solid arrangement. Vocal rings of Neil Diamond, as does the structure and concept of the song…and the vocal register. Conceptually, very interesting and the lyrics paint a nice picture….lots of unique phrases…which is good. I am kind of a stickler for lyrics painting a picture and bringing the senses.
Constructive Comments: Don’t know that I can say anything bad about the song…..because it really works.If I were to give you something to think about (purely pondering here)…… I change the drums in the chorus….and throw in more of a back beat because the drums in the verses are very driving. This might give the listener a chance to catch up because the song comes out of the gate and stays there. That said, when lyrics are so driving like in the verses, sometimes, to give them some space (maybe more drawn out words…ie. M-o-o-o-o-dy verses Moody)….you can cut the number of words down and let the listener catch-up…… Those are just some thoughts to ponder….. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.Best to you….