Broadjam Artist: Charlie Shock
Song: EVERYBODY DREAMS (performed by JENNY GALT)
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: OK I’m in right away with that intro–great acoustic minor chords and ambient vibe parts. You waste no time getting into the tune and move quickly into a really strong chorus. Passionate and powerful female vocals. It reminds me so much of Beth Hart, which is good company. The beat is really hip and suggests 6/8 at times without going fully into it. The chorus/hook is really strong, and the vocal performance is top notch!!
Constructive Comments: You might be crowding things too closely in the sections. I think you need a few bars of turnaround / fill just to space a bit. Typically people do the opposite but this is feeling like the hook sections were cut and pasted into an abbreviated version–what happens, for me, is that the story/theme doesn’t really sink in. This song is so strong but I think this is a really crucial mistake that will keep it from going as far as it could.