Broadjam Artist: Marcel
Song: I Want To Be On Top
Reviewer: Junior Murrell
Positive Comments: Great potential here with this track with crossover potential in two camps pop and rap. Instrumentation can be improved. Reminds a bit of Estelle
Constructive Comments: In places there is too much going on, need to refine the arrangement. Musicianship needs to be tightened up too. The vocal pitching is off in places but hey, so was The Clash and the made a success of it. Recording quality can also be improves. Set out to get the best mix you can, after all, you want people to hear what you’re doing. If it’s in the track I want to hear it otherwise don’t put it in. All the best.