Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: L.A. Waltz
Reviewer: Spitting Lama MIDI
Positive Comments: The electric-piano type part is cool. I’d love to hear it in isolation. If this reminds me of anything it would be Band Ane. I do like the arrangement in that there is actual development. This is one of the few reviews I’ve done where I wanted the song to be longer.
Constructive Comments: All IMVHO: The strings were very strident. Use EQ or different string sounds. It’s almost too experimental/random. I’d make the el. piano part central, make sure that’s developing thru the work and has a point. (I don’t dig through composition. I dig statement and recapitulation.) Then add randomness in a more deliberate manner. It can still sound random/experimental and appeal to a wider audience. Also – the end was very abrupt. Have an end or a fade-out. Hope this helps. Cheers!