Broadjam Artist: DENNIS MAKEPEACE
Song: Words can’t wait
Reviewer: Dana and Brad
Positive Comments: You are a modern Elton John. I love this. Your lyrics are well thought out, beautiful, and relatable. Your voice and your pitch is lovely. Harmonies are spot on and appropriately placed. I really enjoyed listening to this song. The subtle, yet impactful and well placed instrumental solos were spot on. It was a pleasure listening to your music!
Constructive Comments: I really liked the overall feel and general nature of this song so criticism, even that which is constructive in nature, is going to be a bit rough here. I love your song as it is. The only place that I could think to provide some input is with respect to a focus on transforming this beautiful song into something a bit more modern and marketable in this day and age. Adding a bit of synth, some bass, and a bit of percussion may make this song a bit more current. However, I suspect that most of us musicians, including myself, ultimately prefer the good old days where talent and quality didn’t require synth, autotune, and all other related effects. I like this song as if. However, should you wish to make it more “marketable” considering a few adjustments as laid out above may be a good idea. Nevertheless, I love this song and look forward to hearing more!