Broadjam Artist: Patrick Dude
Song: Yesterday-Improv
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Tremendous passion and Pysch-Folk energy here. It has elements of CSN, Waterboys (especially), Of Montreal, Ween, and others. There’s a lot to communicate here and it’s got a great feel.
Constructive Comments: Right now the recording quality is awful, and you start in the middle of things and don’t give any entry point. It’s really hard to get the gist of what this is about beyond an overall pschizophrenic wash (that’s not a bad thing, it just can’t be the only thing).I’d really be interested to know what you want to achieve with this and what the sound you want is. It could be a tremendous tune if you put the editor’s hat on and mix passion with structure.