Broadjam Artist: The Dots
Song: On Target
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: My Woman from Tokayo!!! (Deep Purple) This sounds like a Joan Jett tune with powerful punk energy in the vocals and huge attitude.
Constructive Comments: Intro–with no backup underneath because it’s kinda of a stark riff and the note with 5th under tends to be a little out of tune (for anyone–that’s just the nature of that riff). And more importantly it gets out of sync with the rhythm. During the chorus I think chords rather than the riff would sound a lot smoother. With the drums, vocals, bass, and guitar all going On Tar Get On Tar Get it’s really stark and empty.