Broadjam Artist: Keith Taylor
Song: More Than Friends
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: What a sweet love song! I really liked it! The song tells a story of a relationship that grows from friendship to lovers, told in a totally understandable, winsome way. Song structure is pretty much perfect with a nice bridge to tie everything together towards the end. Favorite lyric: Forever every night. Nice! Great chorus! I think that this song has commercial potential, but setting that aside, it’s just a really good love song and I totally wish you every success with it. Thank you for a recording/vocal performance that ensures that every word is understandable in your song. So many are hard to figure out. Not your composition!
Constructive Comments: The performance and production are good for demo purposes. I would recommend (for commercial purposes) shortening the song. One way you could do this is by making the outro shorter. Anything over 4 minutes can be too much for a country or pop song. Not to say your song NEEDS cutting, but it would probably make it more commercially viable. Consider adding in a female vocal, making it a duet…that might really make it soar.