Broadjam Artist: Keith Taylor
Song: Lonely Out Here
Reviewer: Ross Mabey
Positive Comments: I think that you need to articulate (words were sometimes difficult to understand) more. Also the length of the song was too short for commercial radio.
Constructive Comments: Perhaps you could use more emotional words “heart broken”, “my world fell apart” and say how upset you were. Otherwise it sounds as though you’ll just move on to the next relationship. I know its only a song but what went wrong with the relationship?