Broadjam Artist: Keith Taylor
Song: The Long Ride
Reviewer: Bill Dake
Positive Comments: Like the clarity of the recording and the vocalist has the country sound that fits this tune. Simple but easy to remember hook.
Constructive Comments: As this is most probably a demo I don’t have a lot to comment on as far as the performance….it was fine. I might suggest that the hook needs a more descriptive story line to tie it to. You might want to describe the girl, the journey, when it began, where it began, be a bit more specific. Also, I’d put the emphasis on the word “long” in the hook, stretch that word out. This is a good start, rewrites can be a pain, but they also can reveal a gem……