Broadjam Artist: Bill Beach
Song: Luna is a Dancer
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Nice potent mix and a strong song with a clear & compelling vocal performance. Nice rolling feel and a very pleasant vocal timbre. Kinda Jimmy Buffet meets Lyle Lovett! Nice work
Constructive Comments: Too much intro that’s not really interesting despite being very tight. I’d recommend coming in with vocals straight off. The drum fills are losing the meter pretty severely–much better to have a straight up Country 4/4 keeping things tight throughout–it ain’t about the drummer it’s about the song. The bass should be doing solid arpeggios or country root/5th playing instead of meandering around behind and off the beat. The lead breaks need to make a concise melodic statement IN and OUT. Don’t wander is the basic advice to all instruments here. This is a good tune and easily made much stronger still!!