why has love got to be so sad by DENNIS MAKEPEACE

Broadjam Artist: DENNIS MAKEPEACESong: why has love got to be so sadReviewer: Carol Ann JonesPositive Comments: Nice melody and a strong hook. The rhyming is good but seems a bit forced at times. Good harmonies in the right places. Good luck with th…

DENNIS MAKEPEACE

Broadjam Artist: DENNIS MAKEPEACE
Song: why has love got to be so sad

Reviewer: Carol Ann Jones

Positive Comments: Nice melody and a strong hook. The rhyming is good but seems a bit forced at times. Good harmonies in the right places. Good luck with this song!

Constructive Comments: Some of the lyrics seem a little jammed into the verse, wordy. A key change on the last verse would be beneficial to make the song more dynamic. That’s what’s lacking, dynamics. There’s no build and release.