Month: April 2017

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Dear God

Reviewer: FRED GROSS

Positive Comments: Not a lot to say here. I was too distracted with the lack of timing. Add some bass drum in to help out with that maybe. Tune also needs a hook.

Constructive Comments: Timing is off a lot. Drums aren’t even on time- cymbals and high hat get off with the snare, and bass and guitar seem to be doing their own thing. Work on timing!!

Broadjam Artist: amy abernathy
Song: Georgia Boy

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: This is a really good ol’ country song. I can see people really getting into this in a bar, especially in Georgia.

Constructive Comments: I think this is a good demo but I would like to hear what a good producer could do with it. It is really close but it needs a little tightening up. I would like to hear it played a little heavier.

Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: I Really Want You Tonight

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: Nice song. Great song for a bar.

Constructive Comments: I think the song is a little long. In the bridge I didn’t like the “tall” rhyme. I think there is a better lyric there.

Broadjam Artist: Scott Tingley
Song: Never Fell Out (W/Stacey Allison)

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: Really nice song.

Constructive Comments: My only comment is the some rhymes are a little predictable or cliche.

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Chicken in the Pan

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: This is a fun song.

Constructive Comments: Not sure it is something that would get radio play. But I think it would be a great song for a commercial. You might want to pitch it for a commercial… maybe for a restaurant chain.

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: All My Days In Love With You / Country Rock

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: Nice instrumental. Very pleasant to listen to.

Constructive Comments: I really wish there were lyrics to this song. I am not a big fan of instrumentals.

Broadjam Artist: Drew Hale
Song: Gettin’ Our Church On

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: This song is really good. Love the lyrics and the concept.

Constructive Comments: The tune sounds a little bit predictable. But the lyrics are so cool it still works.

Broadjam Artist: Ford Alfonsi
Song: The New Orange

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: This is a fun song and it is very original. I like the current references like “drain the swamp”.

Constructive Comments: I think this would be a good song in a bar. Not sure if it is something that would make it on the radio but maybe it is original enough to.

Broadjam Artist: Hartmut Oberdieck
Song: bruder leichtfuss

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: Nice groove. The lead guitar is really interesting. Love the bends. Caught me off guard the first time but it really works.

Constructive Comments: I am not a big fan of instrumentals. I wish you had some lyrics to go with this song because it would be great!! Good job!!!

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Come On My Side r1 / Rock & Roll

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I like the sound of the drums and the keyboards, I also like the rhythm guitar sounds, very cool melody.

Constructive Comments: I like the tune, but I think the drums are a little out of sync especially right at the first part of the song – best wishes!