Month: April 2017

Broadjam Artist: Dave Mason
Song: A Song for Mary

Reviewer: Lisa Vivienne

Positive Comments: Peaceful and relaxing! So beautifully orchestrated and arranged, reminds me of being a meadow surrounded by beautiful flowers. The use of violins here is very soothing, well done!

Constructive Comments: it ended too soon….

Broadjam Artist: Elester Steele
Song: Love’s Glow

Reviewer: Lisa Vivienne

Positive Comments: Soothing an calming is this melody. Vocalist is very emotional and expressive. Well done!

Constructive Comments: The recording is not very good and I missed some of the lyrics because this or the vocals need a little more pronunciation. Icould not decide if it were the recording or production or vocalist that caused some of the lyrics to be lost. the song also ended abruptly??

Broadjam Artist: Hartmut Oberdieck
Song: easy going (2006)

Reviewer: Lisa Vivienne

Positive Comments: Great guitar work in this song! The song takes my mind on a journey…nice work, very emotive!

Constructive Comments: no negatives from me, well done! Love it!

Broadjam Artist: Carol Ann Jones
Song: Let Go

Reviewer: Lisa Vivienne

Positive Comments: Lovely melody with great guitar work! Vocals are clear and production is professionally done! great song!

Constructive Comments: no negatives from me All the best with it 🙂

Broadjam Artist: Bonfire
Song: Night Train

Reviewer: Lisa Vivienne

Positive Comments: Great guitar work in the intro to this lovely melody. Reminds me of a bluesy cafe somewhere downtown…

Constructive Comments: I could not hear most of the lyrics because of incorrect vocal diction and pitching. Lovely melody though.

Broadjam Artist: John Masarone
Song: Time Will Tell

Reviewer: Lisa Vivienne

Positive Comments: The song has a good steady uplifting beat, that could easily fit into a dance pop song! Well done!

Constructive Comments: Lyrics need revision, they don’t ring true in some places. Melody needs more variation between chorus and verse.

Broadjam Artist: IBP
Song: I Blame Your Eyes

Reviewer: Lisa Vivienne

Positive Comments: Great vibe to this song! Good melody and good vocals! I can hear this is a teen/tween movie 🙂

Constructive Comments: the vocal lyric ” I blame Your Eyes” did not give the song the “ring” it needs… I would revise those lyrics, especially as this is your hook line… but that is just me, otherwise great job!! All the best with it!

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Hero in My Eyes

Reviewer: Lisa Vivienne

Positive Comments: I love the message of this song! A special song for that special role model in our lives.

Constructive Comments: vocal pitching needs work

Broadjam Artist: Ben Allan
Song: Sober

Reviewer: Lisa Vivienne

Positive Comments: Great catchy melody! Well done on the songwriting!

Constructive Comments: I really liked the melody of this song, but unfortunately the hook line of “I’m Over You” was all that I could hear as the lyrics were either not pronounced properly or the effects on the vocals are too much… Other wise this song has great potential with the right tweaking, I think it could do well for you.All the BestLisa

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: The House By The Rose / Country

Reviewer: Carol Ann Jones

Positive Comments: I love this story song. My favorite kind of country song. Last thing he saw was the spotlight shining on his crown – perfect for the contrast of risk/fame. The vocals and instrumentation are wonderful. Love the arrangement. I hope to hear this song on the radio!

Constructive Comments: I’ve got nothing to add. I love it!