WIth No Goodbye / Country by Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: WIth No Goodbye / Country

Reviewer: Carol Ann Jones

Positive Comments: I like the lead into the chorus. The lead vocal is clean and easy to understand, good pitch. The arrangement is pretty good and the instrumentation is good. The song reminds me of the pop group Savage Garden and their song Truly Madly Deeply. That said, what made that a hit..see below

Constructive Comments: The lyrics are a bit repetitive, cry and goodbye are repeated a lot. The harmony vocals are bit too loud in the mix. In the middle section of the first verse there is a beat skipped. Don’t mean to nit-pick but I hope you’ll appreciate a thorough review. I think this song would strongly benefit from some sparcer backing vocals and more dynamics in the volumes between sections. Good luck with this song!

Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: WIth No Goodbye / Country

Reviewer: Carol Ann Jones

Positive Comments: I like the lead into the chorus. The lead vocal is clean and easy to understand, good pitch. The arrangement is pretty good and the instrumentation is good. The song reminds me of the pop group Savage Garden and their song Truly Madly Deeply. That said, what made that a hit..see below

Constructive Comments: The lyrics are a bit repetitive, cry and goodbye are repeated a lot. The harmony vocals are bit too loud in the mix. In the middle section of the first verse there is a beat skipped. Don’t mean to nit-pick but I hope you’ll appreciate a thorough review. I think this song would strongly benefit from some sparcer backing vocals and more dynamics in the volumes between sections. Good luck with this song!