Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Dear God
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: This song is a prayer, a plea for help from God to “help me through this tragedy.” A stream of consciousness song with a nice rock band instrumentation. Favorite lyric: The part about picking up the Bible and throwing away the whiskey. Everyone at some time experiences the loneliness and emptiness of which the songwriter sings. I like the gradual outro…nicely done.
Constructive Comments: Song doesn’t really have a definable chorus, rather a repetitive beginning “Dear God” which is okay, just different. Keep working on those vocals, Randal. Also I think the vocal needs a bit more gain in the mix. Your friend in FL, Mrs. Kate