Elvis On A Telephone Pole by Jeff Maguire

Broadjam Artist: Jeff MaguireSong: Elvis On A Telephone PoleReviewer: John MasaronePositive Comments: I liked the lyrics. The delivery of them by the vocalist sounds pretty good. It sounds like a live band. There is a lot of energy there. I listen…

Jeff Maguire

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Maguire
Song: Elvis On A Telephone Pole

Reviewer: John Masarone

Positive Comments: I liked the lyrics. The delivery of them by the vocalist sounds pretty good. It sounds like a live band. There is a lot of energy there. I listened to it twice. I would have given it higher marks. See why not below.

Constructive Comments: The mix and production is bringing down what could be a very entertaining song. I just finished rating some of the Six Pack contest entries so I know my headphones are working great. There is a lot of great musicianship going on in the background of your song but you’re going to need a better mix for them. Stereo spread, EQ, dynamics, balancing, etc. It sounds very mid-range-y. No bottom kick drum. You can make this more exciting with a re-mix or re-recording. It’s a good song. It deserves it.