Hello Greyhound by Margie & Art Corey, S. & A. Corey

Margie & Art Corey,  S. & A.  Corey

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey, S. & A. Corey
Song: Hello Greyhound

Reviewer: Michael Cregan

Positive Comments: I like the backing track. Good playing by all players. Nice groove that moves along well and gets your attention. I also like the phrase “Greyhound heading southbound.” Good that you added a key change, right at the right time. Very good vocal character.

Constructive Comments: Some of the vocal is out of sync with the backing track. The lyrics are good, but I’d like to see more support for the main hook of Greyhound southbound. That’s pretty catchy, and to have more of the lyrics memorable like that would be very helpful.

Margie & Art Corey,  S. & A.  Corey

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey, S. & A. Corey
Song: Hello Greyhound

Reviewer: Michael Cregan

Positive Comments: I like the backing track. Good playing by all players. Nice groove that moves along well and gets your attention. I also like the phrase “Greyhound heading southbound.” Good that you added a key change, right at the right time. Very good vocal character.

Constructive Comments: Some of the vocal is out of sync with the backing track. The lyrics are good, but I’d like to see more support for the main hook of Greyhound southbound. That’s pretty catchy, and to have more of the lyrics memorable like that would be very helpful.