Broadjam Artist: Jeff Maguire
Song: Onion Head
Reviewer: John Masarone
Positive Comments: This is a pretty good instrumental. It is like background music when I’m watching hockey highlights on the NHL channel. They always have high energy guitar tunes playing. You may want to investigate it. With an improved production quality I think you’ll have something very marketable. When listening to the hook I kept singing, “I’ll be coming for you,” in my head.
Constructive Comments: I listened to the song on quality headphones. A few things hit me but I don’t know if they can be fixed because I don’t know what the tune was recorded on. I think the mix can improve with more of a stereo spread. Pan some instruments hard left and right. It needs to have more bass, kick drum and overall bottom end. There is a lot of mid-range. Also, you can ear the players playing hard but there is little dynamic range in the mix so your accents and attack can’t be heard. With a fix there will be more excitement.