Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Jeanie
Reviewer: Kathyjo Varco
Positive Comments: This song has a haunting melody that kind of pulls you in. reminds me of Elvis Costello in a way. I get where you’re going with it in terms of the melody and chorus. You’re in a good spot. Overall I’d say you’re 80% there with it. It’s retro but could possible work in the current market. I wish you all the best and I hope these words gave you some encouragement.
Constructive Comments: The guitar work isn’t bad but you might consider working on your timing. I think the drum track you used is a little hard to play with. Perhaps you may look into a few programs like Addictive Drums. It will make your life a lot easier when it comes to writing not to mention playing along. I hope these suggestions find you well and I look forward to your next creation. Keep it flowin’